hcd wrote:But since you relpied in your inimitable way, why don't you give an example? But make sure it's not going to be soap opera like. And don't let it be out of touch with reality
I'm sorry hcd, that came out sharper than I meant it

. Neither of us wants it done soap opera-like. I guess you're thinking of things like Mamma Karin tries to destroy Elin's and Agnes's relationship and makes them run away from home, Elin gets killed and Agnes forgives her mother (who turns out to have incurable cancer) over Elin's grave. Or it turns out that Pappa Olof is in fact Elin's runaway father and that Agnes and Elin are half-sisters, Olof asks Elin to join the dark side ("
I am your father, Elin!"), Elin passes out and when she wakes up can't remember who she is

. But that's not the kind of thing I'm thinking of.
What would I find interesting? I'd just love to know how the story continues. And I'm not thinking of any specific events here. The story so far didn't have elements that are out of touch with reality. There really isn't just that much "happening". It's just a very everyday story. Still it is interesting. So why shouldn't it continue in exactly this realistic way and still be interesting?
I could think of several points at which to continue it, and a lot of ideas have been expressed by a lot of commentators on the interesting questions. E.g.:
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Five hours later". They've found each other. But found each other as what? Friends? Lovers? Not even that is 100% clear by the end of the film, at least not to everyone. How is that strange little conversation on Elin's bed going to continue? I mean, they are two girls who, for all they share, still hardly know each other. What are they going to do or talk about? Sex? Music? School? Stockholm? Watch TV?
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Five weeks later". What will happen in Åmål and in school? How are the other characters going to behave? Will Jessica stick to Markus or to her sister? And Johan? What will Elin's role be with her former companions? Is she going to be an outcast like Agnes or will they be the nucleus of a new gang? How will they defend themselves against open or subtle aggression from guys like Bengtsson and girls like Camilla? And how will that affect their relationship? Just think of the enormous pressure they're going to be under. Will they stand? And who's going to be the strong one now, who's going to waver? Will they be able to save the momentum from their coming out into dull everyday life? Will either one be tempted to return to her old life in the end? And would that be possible? How will the relationship between Agnes and her father and mother develop when she brings Elin home? And most important of all: What will the two be for each other? How is being with Elin change Agnes and vice versa? Is Elin going to read Södergran or Agnes going to love partying, or something different altogether?
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Five years later". Is there going to be a life for Agnes and Elin in Åmål as a couple? Or will their love be crushed by a hostile environment within days or weeks? And how are they going to live on side by side in Åmål in either case? Will they try to escape, together, or just one of them? What kind of persons will have become of them when they leave school and start standing on their own two feet completely? What will they have meant for each other? (Try to picture Elin-with-Agnes or Agnes-with-Elin five years later and Elin-without-Agnes or Agnes-without-Elin five years later - what would it look like respectively?)
As you see, I'm not coming up with events or storylines, but with questions. I personally find these questions interesting. I don't propose myself to write such a story. I have no talent for that. But I think that although all these things could be done soap opera-like, none of them has to be. I'm not interested in dramatic twists in turns, I'm not interested in action. I'm just interested in getting to know these characters more and more and imagine how they could develop in exactly the realistic way they have developed so far. There are millions of possibilities for that, because the ending of the film leaves practically everything open - except for, exactly, that they've found each other.